Mutant 750, #35. “Starlit Bride”


The Beloved ('The Bride') 1865-6 Dante Gabriel Rossetti 1828-1882 Purchased with assistance from Sir Arthur Du Cros Bt and Sir Otto Beit KCMG through the Art Fund 1916

The Beloved (‘The Bride’) 1865-6 Dante Gabriel Rossetti 1828-1882

“Starlit Bride”
Now, as I gaze upon bright stars, remote
and marvel at their majesty,  delight
returns to you again for there I dote
upon another incandescent light.
You are my luminescent, brightest orb;
your glow astounds the dark.  A burning sight,
your spark a universe I would explore
before the sun should scatter all our night.
Our lamp holds oil enough for this short life
my darling wife, whose love retrieves me from
a dark and lonely song; sad herald’s strife;
 lackluster,  ’til we’re in our final home.
As you sleep, a thousand stars may hover;
your light more splendid than our starlit cover.
Prompt: use the word, ‘star’ and the Rosetti painting of ‘The Bride”.

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4 Comments on “Mutant 750, #35. “Starlit Bride””

  1. tnkerr
    May 29, 2015 at 11:17 am #

    “…your glow astounds the dark…” I love this line!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. jacquelinecaseypoetry
    May 29, 2015 at 11:36 am #

    Thank you!


  3. Tony
    May 30, 2015 at 4:42 pm #

    The imagery and the flow of this is gorgeous! I absolutely love that last line.


  4. jacquelinecaseypoetry
    May 31, 2015 at 12:16 pm #

    Thanks, Tony.


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