None of the sonnet forms, perhaps most especially the Shakespearean, is easy to capture; I really admire what you’ve done here to grab onto that invisible beast and pull forth a pantheon of beauty. I think the second quattrain is my favorite, with its visually and aurally alliterative “germinate[ing] his girl with air,” “flowered fling,” and “inseminates imaginings.” It’s clear you’ve spent much effort on perfecting your voice in the Shakespearean form.
Your words are always so gorgeous.
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If I could write poetry liken this, I’d be all set. Truly lovely, Jacqueline. Beautiful!
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Thank you, Susan!
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Lovely!
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None of the sonnet forms, perhaps most especially the Shakespearean, is easy to capture; I really admire what you’ve done here to grab onto that invisible beast and pull forth a pantheon of beauty. I think the second quattrain is my favorite, with its visually and aurally alliterative “germinate[ing] his girl with air,” “flowered fling,” and “inseminates imaginings.” It’s clear you’ve spent much effort on perfecting your voice in the Shakespearean form.
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Thank you so much, Leigh, for your careful read. I will be visiting your site.
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