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  1. Jen
    March 27, 2015 at 2:32 pm #

    Your words are always so gorgeous.

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  2. susanwritesprecise
    March 28, 2015 at 9:38 am #

    If I could write poetry liken this, I’d be all set. Truly lovely, Jacqueline. Beautiful!

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  3. Suzanne
    March 29, 2015 at 2:51 pm #

    Lovely!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Leigh W. Smith
    March 29, 2015 at 4:09 pm #

    None of the sonnet forms, perhaps most especially the Shakespearean, is easy to capture; I really admire what you’ve done here to grab onto that invisible beast and pull forth a pantheon of beauty. I think the second quattrain is my favorite, with its visually and aurally alliterative “germinate[ing] his girl with air,” “flowered fling,” and “inseminates imaginings.” It’s clear you’ve spent much effort on perfecting your voice in the Shakespearean form.

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  5. jacquelinecaseypoetry
    March 30, 2015 at 12:40 am #

    Thank you so much, Leigh, for your careful read. I will be visiting your site.

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