Chimera 66, #2


“The Music Maker”

He played her like an old, worn tambourine;
a frightful, dull man’s musicale.
The thunder from her drum a shallow scene;
a misty, seismic moment from his gal.
The music not enhanced by their dog, Sal
who also entered her embittered howl.
The house reverberates; the neighbors pale
as door and windows rattle from her glance;
as lovely Lynn flew off her Richter Scale.

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8 Comments on “Chimera 66, #2”

  1. susanwritesprecise
    January 22, 2015 at 1:34 pm #

    I enjoyed your take on the prompt. The first line drew me in and kept me there. Good writing!

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  2. Tony Lovell
    January 24, 2015 at 6:10 am #

    Wow! This piece gives me two reactions–the way it flowed for me made it seem like you were telling two different stories at once. In my head I’m picturing one woman in parallel universes experiencing different actions and this piece not changing.

    Wonderfully done!

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  3. EagleAye
    January 24, 2015 at 6:22 pm #

    This tells a great tale. I don’t normally care for poetry, but I like this one a lot.

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  4. jacquelinecaseypoetry
    January 24, 2015 at 10:22 pm #

    Thank you Eagle!

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  5. Suzanne
    January 25, 2015 at 4:23 pm #

    Gorgeous work! I love the intensity in this – and I love that last line so much. Nicely done! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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