“Goodbye Ol’ Christmas”
“Goodbye Ol’ Christmas”
Christmas
tree made a fuss
branches heavy with lust.
Your twinkling bulbs about to bust
You stayed too long at the party for us.
Dark needles on the carpet crust…
Out the door! You adjust
to windy gust,
Christmas!
Write a “Rubliw” poem. Must be a message to someone or some thing.
The poem is mono-rhymed (ie, all lines have the same rhyme sound.
Syllable structure is 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2.
Nicely done! I have a hard time following rules, and the structure and rhyming would’ve left me with a blank page 🙂
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Thank you, Janna…and Merry Christmas, 2015
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