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  1. tnkerr
    June 4, 2014 at 3:22 am #

    …appease old Time. That’s a line I can chew on for awhile.
    Nice.

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  2. jacquelinecaseypoetry
    June 4, 2014 at 11:15 am #

    He’s a devil: old Time. He’s as tough as reality to deal with. The early bird is not a procrastinator, lol.

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  3. Meg
    June 4, 2014 at 8:18 pm #

    “Momentous rage gives worms an early bower
    as haughty love is given to this rhyme.
    Be brave and dauntless but respect his hand;
    your hourglass is tipping with His sand.”

    There is so much passion in this! A fierce take on the prompt.

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  4. S. J. Paige
    June 4, 2014 at 8:30 pm #

    I got so many chills reading this.

    “Your hourglass is tipping with HIS sand.” Ah! The chills! Well done.

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  5. jacquelinecaseypoetry
    June 5, 2014 at 12:19 am #

    Thank you Meg. Yes, lol, when you get to my age, you start taking a serious look at “time”.

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  6. Splendid Empress
    June 5, 2014 at 3:06 am #

    Not many folks take on Sonnets these days – my hat is off to you!

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    • jacquelinecaseypoetry
      June 5, 2014 at 1:39 pm #

      Thanks so much, Splendid! I love writing sonnets. I’ve had lots of practice in the last couple of years.

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  7. Kathy Combs (@Kathy29156)
    June 5, 2014 at 11:06 am #

    I love your last line..”your hourglass is tipping with his sand”. Brilliant! Poignant and breathtaking piece.

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  8. fatgirlinboxinggloves
    June 5, 2014 at 3:33 pm #

    “he’ll snub you when and if you rise again.” Indeed ; )

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  9. Suzanne
    June 5, 2014 at 6:31 pm #

    Fabulous work, Jackie! I especially love those last four lines. Beautifully done. 🙂

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