First Love (Trifecta Entry-First Place )


“First Love”

You take my hand
and in that gesture
satisfy my swirling, naked need,
spellbound as spent leaf
whose golden moment
has no hunger left
but blissful floats
mid magic flutter
back to earth

credit: Dreamstime.com

Photo Credit: Dreamstime.com

Prompt for Trifecta:  use the word, SATISFY.  Count must be 33 words. (My entry took

First Place.  Thank you, Trifecta!)

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7 Comments on “First Love (Trifecta Entry-First Place )”

  1. Christine
    March 20, 2014 at 10:26 pm #

    Oooo, I love this: “spellbound as spent leaf / whose golden moment / has no hunger left.” Beautiful poem!

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    • jacquelinecaseypoetry
      March 21, 2014 at 5:53 pm #

      Thanks, Christine!

      >________________________________ > From: jacquelinecaseypoetry.com >To: jackiecasey@att.net >Sent: Thursday, March 20, 2014 6:26 PM >Subject: [jacquelinecaseypoetry.com] Comment: “First Love (Trifecta)” > > > > WordPress.com >

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  2. trifectawriting
    March 21, 2014 at 7:07 am #

    This is gorgeous, all of it. Love it. Perfect start to my day! Thanks for sharing! By the way, can you check your link up – I came and found you through another link up you did because the current link was empty. Have a great weekend!

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    • jacquelinecaseypoetry
      March 21, 2014 at 5:36 pm #

      I knew I was getting a ‘white page” with the link but not savvy enough to know what to do about it!   Thanks,  Jackie.

      >________________________________ > From: jacquelinecaseypoetry.com >To: jackiecasey@att.net >Sent: Friday, March 21, 2014 3:07 AM >Subject: [jacquelinecaseypoetry.com] Comment: “First Love (Trifecta)” > > > > WordPress.com >

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  3. jannatwrites
    March 21, 2014 at 10:30 pm #

    This is so beautiful. I love the way this phrase rolls off my tongue, “satisfy my swirling, naked need,”

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  4. Hannah Gosselin
    March 23, 2014 at 2:43 am #

    Yes, I had read this on my phone the other day…your words bring so much life to this piece, Jacqueline…

    “spellbound as spent leaf
    whose golden moment
    has no hunger left”

    Wow…the depth of this…poignant and magical…I love the use of alliteration in this!

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    • jacquelinecaseypoetry
      March 23, 2014 at 1:45 pm #

      Thank you, Hannah…the one who is always encouraging…

      >________________________________ > From: jacquelinecaseypoetry.com >To: jackiecasey@att.net >Sent: Saturday, March 22, 2014 10:43 PM >Subject: [jacquelinecaseypoetry.com] Comment: “First Love (Trifecta)” > > > > WordPress.com >

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