Her light has changed
as April shades her eyes.
A backward, golden glance
as Summer strays.
She runs past Autumn’s angst,
alarmed with sighs.
Then grabs the gray: old Winter,
for her days.
Retired teacher. I write for the sheer joy of it. Prefer form over free verse. Favorite: English sonnet. Attended University of Florida, Gainesville,Fl and Florida Atlantic University, Boca Raton. Taught High School English in the '70's.
Freelance Photographer for Hallmark Greeting Card Company in the '70's. Still busy writing poetry.
7 replies to Trifecta:Week 81
Wow! Gorgeous-words, and the sentiment behind them!
This is indeed a WOW! Gorgeous in both content and structure. Really well done!
P.S. please please consider changing the background colour of your blog or making the font darker. Your work deserves to be seen and have proper presence. :))
Wow! Gorgeous-words, and the sentiment behind them!
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Simply lovely.
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I love how you paint her through the season…
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Music to my ears.
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This is indeed a WOW! Gorgeous in both content and structure. Really well done!
P.S. please please consider changing the background colour of your blog or making the font darker. Your work deserves to be seen and have proper presence. :))
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I really like the rhythm of this. Very cool.
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Thank you so much!
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