Trifecta:Week 81


“Seasons”

Her light has changed
as April shades her eyes.
A backward, golden glance
as Summer strays.
She runs past Autumn’s angst,
alarmed with sighs.
Then grabs the gray: old Winter,
for her days.

7 Comments on “Trifecta:Week 81”

  1. Valerie
    August 18, 2013 at 5:50 pm #

    Wow! Gorgeous-words, and the sentiment behind them!

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  2. freyathewriter
    August 18, 2013 at 6:40 pm #

    Simply lovely.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    August 18, 2013 at 8:31 pm #

    I love how you paint her through the season…

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  4. Let's CUT the Crap!
    August 18, 2013 at 10:54 pm #

    Music to my ears.

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  5. Jo-Anne Teal (@jtvancouver)
    August 19, 2013 at 12:01 am #

    This is indeed a WOW! Gorgeous in both content and structure. Really well done!

    P.S. please please consider changing the background colour of your blog or making the font darker. Your work deserves to be seen and have proper presence. :))

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  6. Draug419
    August 19, 2013 at 2:59 am #

    I really like the rhythm of this. Very cool.

    Like

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